Hmmm...well, I think the first couple of panels are mostly good...

Welcome to Oilyrags! I'm Austin Swinburn and this is a record of sketches, art and most especially cartoons that I've made. The cartoons are a special case. I'm publishing five a week with drawings but no words, so it's up to each reader to fill in the blanks. If you are inspired to do so, please go to comments and write out your script for me and other readers. Tons of fun!
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Very stylish strips - you are definitely developing a recognizable signature with these figures. The word baloons clutter things up more than necessary, IMO. And it would be nice to have a background rather than nothing, even though the narrative is the thing here. Good to see anger and agression worked out via art rather than in real life.
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