Friday, October 07, 2005

Hmmm...well, I think the first couple of panels are mostly good...

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very stylish strips - you are definitely developing a recognizable signature with these figures. The word baloons clutter things up more than necessary, IMO. And it would be nice to have a background rather than nothing, even though the narrative is the thing here. Good to see anger and agression worked out via art rather than in real life.

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